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Part 1 has been published! More details here: <blog:1167738>.


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2013-11-02 [Yncke]: That's mainly because I got lazy with the English translations and I'm catching up now. ;)

2013-12-18 [Dr.Mandarian]: So nice! And I love that Patro Klusp too! ^_^ Ooh, and will we meet the elves and windmen, now as well? *jumps up and down*

2013-12-23 [Yncke]: Thanks. :)

Well, not to disappoint you, but I'm wrapping up this part - it's going in the 60 A4 pages direction, that's good enough for one tome - so, um, don't hold your breath?

2013-12-23 [Dr.Mandarian]: *breathes out...* -lol Well, a tome's fair enough for the first. I take that for a teaser then ;)

2014-01-12 [Dr.Mandarian]: Is this the last page, now? Love the solemn, melancholic mood to the funeral pyre scene any case, caught greatly! And the sword sunken in the ashes feels a little bit like some mysterious hint left open at last... Think I still have to read the comic in whole at your private web site once again... But it's a great, almost epic story! And I love the style you developped over the time, with all the lovely details and nifty black and white contrasts... Chapeau, my friend! Has really become a little masterpiece!

2014-01-12 [Yncke]: Thank you! The sword is the murder weapon, I felt it would give it a bit of a 'full circle' feel.

And no, this is not the last page. There's still a little final but important scene to go. I was contemplating putting 'the end' here, but I just can't.

2014-01-23 [Dr.Mandarian]: Great! ^_^

2014-01-29 [Yncke]: Not done just yet... :P

2014-02-04 [Dr.Mandarian]: Don't worry, still following *wink* and a jolly parade of new, very cool creatures you have up there! <img:44166_1164144932.gif>

2014-02-05 [Yncke]: I'm very glad you do. :)

And now part two is completely done. I'll be using the rest of February to clean up - make a cover, fix some things, that kind of stuff.

2014-02-05 [Dr.Mandarian]: Aren't you, eh? ;)
Ah, see, how great! Think I'll read the second part again in whole once more, soon... But I still already find it became excellent! And makin a finishing polish for the overall comicbook sounds like a great activity for the rest of the month! Have much fun with that, dearie, and enjoy the completed work yourself! ( It's been a long way to go ) ~greetings

2014-09-10 [Dr.Mandarian]: Hey, Per'Bat as official comic book? That's so awesome, mate! ^_^ ( Just hoped that this would happen one day... ) Chapeau for all the work over there! Where would I be able to order it, then?

2014-09-10 [Yncke]: :) Thanks! I'll drop a note here when I know where you could order it. It's not out yet.

2014-09-22 [Dr.Mandarian]: Excellent, thank you very much!

2015-02-03 [Dr.Mandarian]: This opening really wakes eagerness, that's so nicely thought up again, with that great 'little' plain and the pittoresque mountain realm, but I even already liked that a lot when you first showed me your map of Eigen back then... Only thing on the first image was at first glance that the single pine tree seemed a bit too blackish, but suddenly now on that second image above the blackish pine trees seem very homogenous to the landscape again... So yeah, that scenery looks very lovely indeed. I'm excited what will take place there now. ^_^

2015-02-05 [Yncke]: Thank you for the remarks. :) Indeed, splitting the whole landscape in two didn't work as well as I had hoped it would.

2015-02-06 [Dr.Mandarian]: No, don't worry, if I imagine that two landscape parts as two-parted "diptychon" the overall will surely work out fine. But: How cool, the ploughman stroke a treasure?! Or an artefact?!! I like how often you put spotlight on such wonderfully ordinary people like that in your stories.

2015-02-11 [Yncke]: Thanks, [Dr.Mandarian]. :) Nope, not a treasure, I'm afraid...

2015-02-11 [Dr.Mandarian]: Rather quite the opposite now, yes... *laugh* ( Poor ploughman )

2015-03-19 [Dr.Mandarian]: Very promising plot so far... like the beginning of a mystery thriller... and I like the characters too - especially the three funny guards and the wise lady... Wish they'd all become main part of the storyline

2015-03-19 [Yncke]: The lady is one of the main characters of the two previous issues, so yeah, she'll come back. ;) (She cut her hair as a sign of mourning at the end of the previous part, and while I could use magic as an excuse to give it the normal length again here, I felt it would be more realistic to make an educated guess how long it'd be over the time of a pregnancy and stick to that. It does compromise recognisability, though. :s )

I've also got plans for two of the tree guards. O:-)

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