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about me

I’ve been an active member for 5 years
this is a great place to meet people. I’ve created some
wiki's baby stewie will take over the world
and still attempting to make a music class room.
I have a song out in *songs* I’m a member of insult arena,jelly lovers,captain jack's pirate pics,three word story,bob's diner,astroadoptionsand,now plus a few others.

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What will I do?

For elftown I think we need more good people in this
site who are just FRIENDS
not just talking to you to cyber or tell you off
I’m here to give my services to protect all of those
in need of help or those simply idiotic and don't know how to follow the RULES.
So I hereby promise to serve and protect all in
need.
Ok I know I disobeyed some art rules in the past we all make mistakes. After re- reading the art rules (I got the entire test question right...how B.A.)
And fixing my site a bit everything is all right.

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For How Long:

Until hell freezes over,well I’m here every day
I know sad,but this place is my life
I guess I’m just a proud member
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Supporters:

Please put your name below if you are a supporter.
[thisfleshatomb]---of coarse I support myself *salutes*


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2006-11-15 [thisfleshatomb]: okay hun

2006-11-15 [thisfleshatomb]: i fixed a few items

2006-12-13 [Firenze]: To be honest this page needs a lot of work, for starters full stops, capital letters and proper punctuation might be nice. Also showing that you can use pseudo html, adding colour and showing you can link wiki pages as well instead of having the read things.

You have not said:
- Whether you can handle forums, polls etc.
- Whether you can get on with members of the crew.
- Whether you can make good reports.

Your English is incoherent and not that impressive to be quite honest. So to me that says your English is pretty bad, no offence.

There is a lot more than that you could improve on, but these are just a few things that could be done. I suggest you look at some of the people who have been accepted into the crews applications or even some of the highly ranked ones.

2006-12-13 [Paz]: Also make sure talk about what your abilites are :P Mention a couple noteable things you have done and what you plan to do in the future to help this site. Go with what [Firenze] says as well, improve english o.o The crew needs to be able to use -nearly- proper english, so show that you can here :)

Fix the wiki links. For ideas on what you will do... make them coherent and understandable so people actually have some idea what you are planning to do to help out.
Separate each idea into different, complete sentences (or bullet them in an organised fashion), and when you change topics... start a new paragraph ;)
As for reports, if you're going to write that you've made a ton of them, make you have! Making lots of good reports is another way to get yourself "noticed".

Make the page pretty too... helps to stand out from the rest of the crowd.

2006-12-13 [Paz]: Sorry if I'm offensive but it does need a lot of work ^^;

2006-12-14 [thisfleshatomb]: ok i only changed a couple of thing i just was hit by a car so i don't have much time at the moment to really fix things up by i will after i have my surgery.*for my leg* i do apologize for this disgrace of a wiki...i'll get to work on it!!! and what you both said was not offencive but insightful... and again my apologies

2006-12-14 [Firenze]: It is not a disgrace ^_- Just needs a lot of hard work done on it. I just seem harsh when I write things up, it is a terrible problem of mine ^_^

2006-12-14 [thisfleshatomb]: tis fine and about my english i speak many languages so it's
hard you know to remember sertain words in english i speak mostly german...so i'm not going to go up to every one like
wer kann deutsch? (who speaks german)

2006-12-14 [Firenze]: I am the same but English is my first language and is more dominant for me. Also I know what 'wer kann deutsh?' means, my German isn't that bad, lol ^_-

2006-12-18 [thisfleshatomb]: well i don't know you so sorry i wouldn't know if you did or not......

2006-12-18 [thisfleshatomb]: is this a wee bit better?

2006-12-18 [Firenze]: It is getting better, still could do with improving ^_^

2006-12-18 [thisfleshatomb]: yeah i know but i don't have much time

2006-12-19 [sequeena_rae]: Then you shouldn't really be applying :)
You really do need a lot of free time if you wish to become a guard.

2006-12-20 [thisfleshatomb]: i will after i am done with aall the stuff that's happened to
me....i got hit by a car so alot of attorney and medical stuff
plus my uncle just died V_V

2008-11-11 [Alexi Ice]: If I may comment, all of these (^_^) faces should probably be taken down as well, they don't look very professional and the random (...) look out of place as well.

2008-11-19 [Alexi Ice]: It lacks detail, and on the 'apply to the crew page' it has questions that should be answered or at least attempted by all applications ^^ Not required, but it might help boost yours to the next level.

2008-11-19 [Alexi Ice]: Oh and an apply to the crew link might help as well

2008-11-19 [Alexi Ice]: You spelled course wrong at the bottom, as well.

2008-11-25 [Fearathress]: I will support you of cource. If you need help just let me know. I hope you are doing a bit better, and I am sorry to hear about the accident. Ja, ich sprechen Deutsch.

2008-12-08 [thisfleshatomb]: i'll update this later promise!

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