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The End

“I wish I could have,” he starts.
I silence him.
I wish he could have too.
But no amount of wishing will change the fact that he didn’t,
And he won’t, so—
“Let’s not.”
I say,
And that’s that.

Written by [Triola]




Is It Just Memories

I see it again
It's like yesterday
I hear those sounds
Somehow I know them
That touch, that taste
They're all the same
Am I dreaming?
Reliving today in my bed?
Those thoughts, those words
I've had them, read them before
It's tiring knowing these things already
But experiencing them again in different colors
Love, loss, heartache, sorrow, death
Wrenches my insides like a stale ale
New, this is what I need
New ideas, new feelings
Shock me, make me weep with joy
Make me laugh in madness
Disturb me, thrill me
Is that so wrong to wish for?
I need to stop these dreams
Or maybe
I need to forget these memories

Write by [Susie-Q]




bump

it started with a bump,

knees touching under the table, and wine -
orion looking at our reaching hands.
pulses of pleasure rushing up my spine
as we lay upon the cooling, warm sands.

a short retreat to the familiar,
then back by elastic, invisible;
an invincible bond, auxiliar
to our need to try the impossible.

then, a morning of ends and beginnings;
new shorelines and nourishing upwellings -
a deep breath, a silent sigh, a longing.
gratification of struggles changing.

now, our streams are clogged by alluvium,
heavy sediment settling on our will.
bitterness erodes the synovium
that soothed our voices, our feverish chill.

this crepuscular part of our travels
has been dark, but now turns towards light.
as the course of our road unravels
we take off, leaving bumps out of sight.

Written by [törnen]




in the city night

in the city night,
you can hear the tram tracks singing
long before the beast shows up.

in the city night,
you can hear the long, lonely sighs
of ads changing on displays.

in the city night,
sea ice gathers to recite choral lullabies
to ears that cannot hear.

my city never sleeps soundlessly;
silent are only the beating hearts and
vibrating vocal chords
of the creatures of the day.

yet,

ads shine,
without minds to saturate;

trams roll on,
without legs to rest.

in the city night,
mine are the only ears listening;
mine, and the quiet fox,
who nervously leads me to the morning.

Written by [törnen]



Potential

I look at you
And there, in a flash,
I see yellow, red, blue,
Realigned, warm and new,
I see passion, heat, you.

And there, in a flash,
I see a future, and thus,
Through potential, thrill, fuss,
I see us.

Written by [Triola]





Along the Way

White phantoms, keep dreaming-
There's an eerie voice in the rain;
Black thunder, deamons-
Something is calling out my name.
Follow the dim lights of an ancient road,
It's so old it's forgotten where it goes;
There's a lone wolf crying out to me,
With a hunger sounding way down deep.
I see him, gleaming,
Look away and just continue on.
Hiding among the trees along the highway-
A white phantom, a midnight ghost.
He brings a promise of warmth and shelter,
A haunted kindness I don't want to know.
Silver clouds, brimming,
Shadowing the greed hiding in mist's eyes;
The moon shines, grinning,
Reflecting a kindness in his lies.
A golden sun is rising slow ahead,
Frightening the shadows and the lone wolf brave-
I see no danger on the road before me,
Bright light shines through as the darkness fades.
The white phantom is so small and old,
Just a grey spirit as the dawn unfolds.
His bones are laying along side the highway
Marking his despair with an ancient grave.
His curse I'd follow if I'd strayed from my way:
A lonely phantom, a lost soul.

Written by [kamisch]




False Things

See my family,
Full of smiles -
They are what the world don’t know.
See my smile,
Signs of pleasure -
Coming to place where anger’s due.
There’s my family,
Laughing together -
Always putting on a lovely show.
Hear my laughter,
Signs of pleasure -
Auto-response when fear is cued.
In a beautiful house we live, love and play,
And I stay in that house, day after day.
See my shadow,
In the tined bay window -
I see beauty outside, but it can’t get in.
There’s laughter in here,
And smiles ever-after;
There’s repression in there,
Behind the dreamy eyes
Of the smiling home.

Written by [kamisch]





Emotion's Commotion

I feel a surge of emotion coming
        it's calling me from behind
               "Answer me," it says and,
                              "you must do, have to show me
                                - don't keep me locked inside!"

I open my mouth but no words come out;
I open my eyes and let fear flow about.

Light'ning rays of thought,
                    come enter;
      Quickly strands of thinking enter-
          I feel them in my brain,
                       they're saying,
                "Open your mind now, please let us in.
   We're on your side so, come on and let us in!"
                          - All at once I'm crying.

I open my mouth but not much comes out;
I open my eyes and the tears flow about.

I close my eyes...It's not helping!

Flashing bolts of thundering hate
        come knocking at my door.
  I answer it and all smiles disappear-
      "GO away!" I say, "Go away!
             I don't need you here no more!"

I feel a surge of emotion coming
       as I push it all aside.
             "Let us in!" They all beg and say,
                           "You must do, have to show us
                           - don't keep us blocked away!"

Written by [kamisch]






Get

I got rid of my worries, got rid of my fears
  Decided to live through the rest of my years
I’ll not be held in one place,
I’ll live in the world with an air of grace.

I moved into the world, moved into a home
  Decided that Nowhere is not where I’d roam
I’ll make my own choices,
I’ll fill my heart with sweet voices.

   I shall be free, I shall be me;
   I shall be whatever I’m meant to be.
   I shall not cry, I shall not lie;
   I shall not say that I can’t learn to fly.

My brain is not shackled, Evil has dispersed,
 The burden of Perfection is no longer mine—
   The weights have been lifted and I feel fine.

I got rid of my worries, moved into the world,
  Blocked out the most painful of memories.
      My life is not free, but I call it my own.

Written by [kamisch]


Gone

He is gone,
nowhere to be found,
Grandad where are you,
I keep looking around,
I walk the streets looking for you,
to which I cannot find,
I can't believe your gone,
and left us all behind.

Written by [kians mummy]


Found

I found this dog,
with no collar or name,
I hoped it wasn't stolen,
as I would get the blame,
So I took it to the Police,
and they put me under arrest,
Then they discharged me,
So guess I was blessed.

Written by [kians mummy]


Me

I am me,
I am what you see,
Take me as I am,
I'll be your number one fan,
and I will help you,
in whatever way I can.

Written by [kians mummy]



Nature's Blessing

Sunrise Golden
Sweet arrays
of glitter, warmth,
and shiny rays.
Heat the earth
and warm the waters,
warm your children,
sons, and daughters.

Nourish life,
take cold away.
Be the warmth
of Nature's call,
until you must
rest once more.

Moonlight Silver,
softest caress,
gentle beams
of silent nights.
Share with stars
the sky you do.
Adorned in silvers,
reds, and blues.
Another beauty,
Nature's Rest.

But once again,
when you leave,
allow the nourish
light of Sun,
to dawn its light,
this day once more.

Written by [Druid Fables]


The lITTle poem in propour ENgliSh

THeRe !once was a poem,
in p r, o p o u r egnlish.
But he was misunderstood,
  and loo ked quiet @trocious
his rhymes weren't- quite right
but they, woRKed som times
just! not, in the correck scheme
which rhymes. with team
THE ENd
ryhms with ben
kinda?
too"
DONCHA KNOW.

ANGRILY WRITTEN BY [Mortified Penguin], NOT THAT IT'S ANY OF YOUR DAMN ASS BUSINESS

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A Ghost

I live with Ghosts
I see her
In the corner of my eye

I live with a Ghost
She cries
And I try to shut her away

I Live with Ghosts
Memories
I just can't forget

I Live with a Ghost
Why is it
She has to look so much like me?

Written by [pegasus1000]




I Can't Wait to Tie the Knot

I made a new friend today,
With which I'll waste my life away.
I roped him in with charm and wit,
I gave him a chair, but he won't sit.
Doesn't say much, but he's quite well rounded,
Though he's a bit high and not all that grounded.
I'll go out on a limb and say we'll hang,
I'll be so happy, no more pain.
I'm choking up, it'll be so fun,
Hanging out in the summer sun.
I'll finally be happy and full of bliss,
Even the chair will get a kick out of this.

Written by [Mortified Penguin]



Abandon

There I am standing, dark and alone
Shivering, for the wind is cold.
I go to speak, yet my lips fall apart,
Abandoning me.

The silence unbroken deafens my ears
On my knees now, I am brought to tears.
I go to scream, yet my lungs collapse,
Abandoning me.

There I am gasping, sad and alone
Shuddering, for my skin’s gone cold.
I go to sleep, but death turns it’s back,
Abandoning me.

Written by [Tacosaves]



No Anchor

Though my sails tore long ago,
and I smell of rotten wood,
I'm caught here, on this sea
of breath and thoughts and blood.

Without aim, I wander on,
seeking out the final storm,
to break me, set me free
from life's desperate gripping hold.

My heart breaks against the rocks
from the memory of the waves
and the cooling breeze at night
piercing through the dulling heat.

Your sails sometimes pass me by
full of stories, full of sun,
bringing both the love I need,
and the pain of what is gone.

But I will disintegrate,
and to water I'll return,
where you won't see me again,
only feel a breeze, relieved.

My heart breaks against the rocks
from the memory of the waves
and the cooling breeze at night
piercing through the dulling heat.

Written by [törnen]





Who Are You?

Who are you?
Standing there,
Washing dishes once again,
You've cleaned this house,
Fifty times,
You've lost yourself my friend.
Your writing sucks,
Your clothes don't match,
You're singing kids' songs in your head,
You need to take your crazy self,
And climb back into bed.
These little people,
Who are they?
They call you mom I see,
One is screaming for all to hear,
The other is standing in a puddle of pee.
Just close your eyes,
They'll go away,
I promise you, they will.
Until that toddler of yours,
Finds something else to spill.
This is who you really are,
The past means nothing now,
It coudn't be more beautiful,
I couldn't be more proud.

Written by [MyAlterEgo]




For J

Some things that I need to say,
Aren't so easy to be told.
But I'm hoping that you'll listen,
As I'm trying to be bold
She's destroying you, you see.
You're not the friend I know
And I hate to have to be the one
To tell you so.
But I'm standing here,
I'm screaming it,
I need for you to see
How very much I love you
How much you mean to me
Not a thing I wouldn't do for you
A thing I wouldn't say
As I stand here,
Silently begging,
Asking you to stay.
Come hold my hand,
Walk with me,
Maybe then you'll see,
The person that you really are,
The person you can be.

Written by [MyAlterEgo]




What If It Were You?

It's so easy to judge someone for a decision you never had to make,
A thought you never had to think.
You can look down on them,
Spit if you'd like,
How about a condescending glare?
Whisper behind your hand,
Talk behind their back,
Gossip.
But secretly you're wondering,
Silently you're screaming,
For an answer.
Something to tell you that you'd do it differently,
That you're better than them,
You'd never succumb.
But how do you know?
How do you know?

Written by [MyAlterEgo]




Plausible Fool

Oppression, depression,
Hate is your obsession.
No one could understand you,
You're so above it all, below
It all. No one has been hurt
Like you have been hurt.

Isolation, desolation,
Contradictory information.
"Keep away, I've been too hurt
To keep you close!"
"Why does everyone always leave
Me when I only push them away?"
Stay, stay, leave me, stay.

Frustration, aggravation,
A ripping violent sensation.
Kicking, screaming, always dreaming
That someone could love you for the
Paradox you've named yourself to be.
Fool.
You are no paradox.

Written by [Nioniel]




Smoke

The days go by,
Without a word.
Yet you're never gone from my thoughts.
I'm searching for a way to reach out to you,
And all I can grasp is smoke.
Like you were never really here,
Like you never really cared.
You tell me not to give up,
What more can I do?
The only thing I want,
Is a way to be with you.
A piece of me,
Forever gone.
I hold in my hand,
And release,
Smoke.

Written by [MyAlterEgo]




Selfless

Absence brings realizations
i could live without you
but i don’t want to
i've realized in our time apart.
that i could easily and happily
spend the rest of my life with you
a cute pickup truck, a small house in
the country.
just you and me babe.
that's my paradise.
i've come to the realization
that id follow you anywhere
in this past month.
i've seen a completely different side of you
a vulnerable side, a side that was scared to
say "i love you."
A side that was scared to say "don’t leave me."
Knowing your history,
i feel like you've come so far.
too love and trust me the way you do.
i feel really special and blessed.
and i want to prove to you
that i'm worthy of those things
i want to take care of you, and never hurt you.
i never want you to feel abandoned ever again.
i will love you aslong as you let me.
and i will never leave no matter what comes our way
and if you ever decide that you don’t feel that way anymore.
i’ll let go. Because that's how much i love you.
i will never keep you against your will,or from happiness.

Written by [LIL_ELF_GURL14]




Preserved Memories

The leaves are wilted and the petals have lost
Their scent as the years have slowly crept by,
So the last physical reminder of you is carefully
Preserved between two glass panels held together
By the only oak frame I could find that perfectly
Matched your eyes.

Written by [Nioniel]




Your Legacy

One, beautifully romantic effigy...
How thus it becomes such a collapse,
Collapsing within its own possessive will...

Even if the desire might be much greater,
Simpler than the want, you continue to pursue...
Seething a sharp thorn with faith the size of trolls...

You've already hypothesized that with such a...
Beauty, a thorn... It relinquishes hope,
The non-living and deceased.

Yet, with the weapon,
Is your effigy,
An aggregating synthesis of hurtful poppy...
With its excrement still such a fragrant,
Calm... Subtle sweep of air...

Like the blood of dragons,
Lengthening across continents composed of flames...
Fleshy abysmal spawns erratically versing,
Opposing the same and other...

Keepsake, your thorn...

Keepsake, your effigy.

Written by [Galax'Or]




Fractured Fairy Tale

The after-taste
of this time wasted
may travel through the constellations
of your heart encasement

And the princess-
prisoner of her own perfect palace-
could be rescued
without her resentment or resistance

Our fairy tale facade free trial
with cake and ice cream smiles
could pan out for a while
or end in the unyielding denial
of emotional exile

Like a moth that holds a flame
so dear despite the pain
if loss is all I gain
I would still never change
the day I learned your name

Because even your absence
has ten times the presence
of every moment I spent
without you.

Written by [Chaos Called Creation]




Red River

Death is so welcoming at the moment,
The house of death invites me in,
The hands of doom reaching out to play,

Blood shall flow forth like a river,
This river shall be rushed forth unto all,

Death so inviting... so exhilarating...
Won't you become one with death?
But to become one shall ruin the fascination,

Bloody roses lay across a river,
Captivating to the eye of the beholder,
Deathly screams coming from a blood red river,
Forever being one with the river are screams,

A single white rose floats along untouched but not unseen,
this rose is another last heart of a dying person,
Turning red slowly but surely....
Death is but a heartbeat away in The Red River...

Written by [Rising Death Dragon]




Cede

I am walking home, and I am aching.

Nothing ever gets more resilient,

I just grow used to the pain.

It’s the same thing every day.

And every day. And every day.

I am tired.

Tired of the repetition of my steps

As I am stuck in this rut.

Stuck in this wicked groove. 

I am tired.

Tired of fighting.

So I will cede to my throes,

And give in to their wake.

Written by [Tacosaves]




Just another tear

Its just another tear my darling,
Sliding down your cheek
as you pick up the remote and
shut the TV with a click

and the dark that fills it all
seems so thin and frail
as you close your eyes in silence
and allow your thoughts to trail

and its just another tear my baby
crashing on the floor
as you hear the night outside
and then the closing door

yes, just one last tear, my love
falling from your eye
as I close this door forever
without saying goodbye

Written by [Sauron]





Shatter

Every word you've ever spoken
Turned out to be a lie
Every memory,
I'm choking on,
Trying not to cry.
I'm trying hard to hate you,
Tune out the pain I feel,
But it just keeps coming back to me,
How much I love you still.

Written by [MyAlterEgo]




Ask to Risk

Eventually ignited by perfume and consumed by desire,
A fire in my heart climbed ever higher.
There's not much left for me here,
Since I wasn't able to endear.
Really, all I wanted was to make them smile;
A little bit for a little while.
Maybe I tried too hard? Maybe it wasn't enough.
Even I'm not this tough.
No longer will I be brisk, all I ask is you
Ask to risk.

Written by [perfumed ignition]




Dream Girl

The sun, golden, flowed down the world,
Beams, glowing, bent and curled.
The oceans gleamed, brilliantly blue,
That sparkling, twinkling, cerulean hue.
It filled my mind, my purblind sight;
I saw it, felt it, every night...
But my eyes opened and light streamed in;
My sunshine gone until night again.
Lately though, it won't rise for me,
My dreams give way to reverie.
It's gone now, nevermore to be,
So live on, dear, in poetry.

Written by [Mortified Penguin]



Without

I don't know how to be light,
Without darkness.
Free,
Without being caged.
Honest,
Without lying.
Happy,
Without being sad.
Whole,
Without feeling empty.
Me,
Without you.

Written by [MyAlterEgo]




Silence

My lips are sewn shut
By the threads I've woven
Lies I've strung together
Paths I never should have chosen
To walk with you
Hand in hand
Foot in mouth
I've ruined it all
Simply by being silent
When I should have just spoken.

Written by [Nuriko-kun]




Obsession

A simple truth that was once told
A tale of fantasy that mortals behold
Of dragons, fairies, and so much more
That we hold deep inside our core
One great obsession that we adore
Now we see the world was bold
Our dreams of a place where we can hold
The creatures of our fantastic dreams
Do exist inside us it seems
Exploding through our creative seams
So we can embrace them with our hearts
And see them physically with our arts

Written by [Koho Ai]




End of the Line

I don’t know why I cling to you in spaces so lonesome
but push you away at the slightest movement;
because I feel that you will run anyway and I know it can’t last forever
because nothing does.
Because I always end up back where I started,
in a vicious cycle where I am always wrong and I deserve nothing
because nothingness I am
and I wonder if this is how all souls feel
or if I am the sole one
like this.
And that I push and let you drift away because
like all the others,
there was nothing to tie us together anyway.

Written by [Akayume]








The phoenix
As a fleck of blue heat,
a bird's schematic
that kindles in an oxygen gust


Does it grow up to do all the same things?


Written By [dark starlight]








For him

In the beginning I felt like I’d found what I was looking for
you were my one.
I’ve grown since then and realised I wouldn’t follow you anywhere.
Not because I don’t love you but because I love myself.
I have a life here.
I have dreams and aspirations and they aren’t built around yours.
I wish you treated me the way I deserve.
But im tired of asking that of you.
If you wanted to, you would have by now.
I hate the way you make me feel.
I hate that i love you.
My mind is smart but my heart is wounded and hopelessly in love.
I wish I could leave.
But im scared to be alone, and im scared to let you be someone else’s.
I’m not ready to let you go, I still have hope that you’ll be my one.
But im not giving up everything I am, for you.
My life wasn’t built around marriage and love.
It was built around me and my happiness.
I come first this time.

Written by [LIL_ELF_GURL14]




In The Box

Pandora had a box
Unknowing of fear
Only aware that the gods were good

What greater gifts
Could be found
In this box?

Pandora had a box
Unknowing of violence and pain
Only knowing the gods to be kind

What greater gifts
Could be found
In This box?

Pandora Had a Box
That when opened
Fear and dread
Pain and Violence
All Woes were to be had

Pandora had a box
and at the bottom was hope
There was no need for it before

What Greater Gifts
Could be found?
Hope

Written by [pegasus1000]





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2013-05-01 [Mortified Penguin]: There, now it's fixed and flawless.

2013-05-01 [Flisky]: Now you're just trying to annoy me.

2013-05-01 [Mortified Penguin]: Nuh uh, all those "Written by [Mortified Penguin]" lines were part of my updated poem. They were supposed to show an echo of the author, explaining who he was and that he too was flawed, and then it finished up with a "Written by anonymous" to signify that the author himself wasn't even the author and that there's a mysterious third party, which is an effect often used by Poe and Rembrandt in their poetry. The uQt'd <hr> at the end shows that the poem is complete, but still, following the motif of imperfection, flawed.

2013-05-01 [Flisky]: ...no. Just no.

2013-05-01 [Mortified Penguin]: And the rules also state, "The Daily Poem Bosses will not correct your submission for you." But you "corrected" my updated submission. That's cheating. D:

2013-05-01 [Flisky]: The Daily Poem bosses also reserve the right to remove poems from the page and ask people to stop commenting and posting. Please do not make me do that Mort.

2013-05-01 [Mortified Penguin]: Actually, the rules state that they can, "reserve the right to not feature poems based upon the quality of work," not based on personal vindiction and jealousy of an author's talent. And there's nothing about them being able to stop commenting and posting that's relevant and actually about the submissions and the rules. There's just a short request that chatter be kept off the page, so that the things I'm trying to discuss can be discussed. However, I will concede to you and leave it at that and not further edit my now mangled poem. I hope you are happy.

2013-05-01 [Mortified Penguin]: On that note, I would like to point out that I've submitted a new poem and would like to make sure it's acceptable. Is it acceptable?

2013-05-01 [Flisky]: There are things about not spamming the page. And yes, that's fine, if that's what you want to post.

2013-05-01 [Susie-Q]: your eloquent use of the English language is causing my diaphragm to erupt in uncontrollable spasm leaving me in tears on the floor. I believe the pigmies of Africa refer to thus phenomena as laughter. It's so painful yet beautiful. Bravo mort, you have used speech to send my abdominal muscles into convulsions. All praise "written by [Mortified Penguin]"

2013-05-01 [Mortified Penguin]: That is a good point. But, so this page isn't clogged with spam about how great my poetry is, please take it to Daily Poets' Choice. And feel free to nominate my poems to be on Mainstreet while you're there!

2013-05-02 [Susie-Q]: Too lazy. But someone definitely should. Yeah, definitely.

2013-05-06 [Flisky]: [pegasus1000]: please fix the format of your submission.

2013-05-10 [Susie-Q]: spacing from what I see. Though im running on two hours of sleep and a hangover so I could be mistaken

2013-05-10 [Chimes]: Because the bosses haven't replied yet: I do believe the error that was there has been fixed. It looks fine to me now. (There was a colon where there shouldn't've been.)

2013-05-10 [Flisky]: Oops. Sorry. This page was lost in my wiki comments section. Yes, the error was fixed.

2013-05-25 [kians mummy]: So have my poems gone to the queue?

2013-05-25 [wicked fae mage]: Yes, if the poems were here before, aren't now and:
-they weren't removed after a warning was given about a mistake
-you didn't take them down

2013-12-31 [wicked fae mage]: [dark starlight], please fix the format of your submission

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