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Thunder Cid for the Crew

"For the good of the community."


Desired Position: Council member who specializes in Elftowns history and competitions.


Elftown work related experience:
Member of the Elftown Guides, Seat on the Board of Governors, Member of the Patrollers, Columnist for The Town Herald, Member of the Festivals staff, Teacher and head of the Chemistry department.

Heddate work related experience:
Trainee in the Elf12 Council
Member of the Elf12 Patrollers


Extracurricular activities and awards:
Former featured member
Participant in Elftowns Valentines, Christmas, and Halloween poetry competitions.
Participant in the ET Roleplayers.
Photographer for the reference pictures
Poet for the Elftown Creature Marathon
Creator and Moderator of the Landscape Photo Contest 2009-2010, Haiku Contest, and Black&White photo contest 2008-2009


Career goals and objectives:
To build new role playing competitions.
To discuss ideas and build new marathons.

Who am I personally
I am an artist with a double specialty in sculpture and acrylics. In my free time I love to sketch Final Fantasy characters and hummingbirds. I'm also an avid writer working on my third book. Occasionally I submit a poem to the daily poem when I feel it's up to par. If I have the time I will participate in a role playing adventure on Elftown. In all honesty I'm a normal person, granted I do love being a nerd. I've been told I'm both hard working and a procrastinator. I'm typically a friendly person, though socially awkward most of the time. One of the things I am proud of myself for being able to do is problem solve in a logical manner. So in a nutshell I'm a awkward, hardworking, nerdy, logical artist.

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2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: 'If given the chance I would try my hardest to learn as fast as I can'

I think there is something wrong with this sentance, I just don't know what...I think it should be

I will try my hardest to learn as fast as I can


I would try my hardest to learn as fast as I could.

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: As a member of the crew it would gladly work hard to make Elftown better

As a member of the crew I will gladly work hard to make elftown better

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: I would try to push the rest of the crew to recognize photographers

I will try to push the rest of the crew to recognize photographers.

In most of the paragraphs you are speaking in past tense, you might want to fix that

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: There's no problem there.

I am not sure that this is a sentence

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: Literally, I'm a sponge

This is not a sentance either and neither is this;

Because I think I would be a productive member of the crew.

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: I'll keep this and brief. I love elftown.

This should be

I'll keep this breif; I love elftown.

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: who may be stuck on any of their own ideas.

This sentance doesn't necessarily make sense

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: I can multi-task when needed to so I have no problems juggling as many assignments given to me.

I can multi-task when needed so I have no problems juggling the many assinments given to me. ^^

Ok, that is all I have found so far...

2008-11-13 [Thunder Cid]: Wow...I suck at grammar.

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: And you may want to add a link back to the apply to the crew

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: It's not a problem, I am just overyly obsessed with grammar. LOL. That is why I want to be an english major.

2008-11-13 [Thunder Cid]: And that's why I'm an art major XD

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: ^^ Anyway if you change the past tense to present tense and fix what I mentioned it should be good.

2008-11-13 [Chimes]: Mine was pretty much all in the past tense.. :P But then again... mine was weird. XD

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: OH! I want to read yours ^^

2008-11-13 [Chimes]: Mine's on apply to the crew in the crew section thinger. :] Second from bottom... I think.

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: I went and checked it out ^^ And commented! Woot.

2008-11-13 [Thunder Cid]: Okay I fixed errors.

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: Alright cool.

2008-11-13 [Thunder Cid]: *passes out*

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: What?

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