2007-12-30 [iippo]: Wow, this is incredibly cool. I've just read the first three chapters and I absolutely love it. :)
2008-02-19 [DarkAngel3]: Richard, did you add my edits to this one, or just to the fictionpress.c
2008-02-19 [Eyonic]: oooo, I'm liking this and I'm only in chapter 2
2008-02-20 [Delta Operator]: Not to worry; I added your edits.
2008-02-21 [DarkAngel3]: Thank you...
I should probably finish editing it :)
2009-08-22 [Freya's Eyden]: This is really good, I'm not that far into it, but it seems well written and awesome.