Page name: The City of Eliy [Logged in view] [RSS]
2009-11-05 05:40:40
Last author: Firous
Owner: Firous
# of watchers: 10
Fans: 0
D20: 15
Bookmark and Share

The City of Eliy

In this world there are three types of dragons, the noble Red, the scavenger brown, and the evil black. Red dragons live in a family type society, and befriend humans since they carry the same values for family. They are looked highly upon and speak to people with telepathy. They are extremely intelligent and enjoy a good challenge of wits.

The black dragons are massively huge brutes that are twice the size of a full grown red dragon. They are vicious and have a competition with the red dragons on breeding grounds. The black dragons like to breed and live in ground based caves as do red dragons. They tend to live in tunnels that they have dug into mountain faces or sometimes in the bottom of valleys. The black dragons will fight to the death to destroy a family of red dragons to use the cave to raise its young then leave and return to their tunnels. They are often hunted by humans and elves alike, for they tend to like the taste of humans and elves. They do have a breath weapon but no one is quite sure what it is. There have been stories of fire, ice, and even acid. Though none have lived to tell what it was.
The brown dragons are the size of large Great Danes and are scavengers, for the most part. When they can they will hunt and kill the smaller/younger of the gryphons that live on the coasts. Gryphons and brown dragons have been enemies for centuries.

There are a number of different mythical animals that live in this world, including but not limited to: Moor cats, Pegasai, Unicorns, Thunderbirds, Roc's, Hell hounds, and many others that still need to be discovered. Once Eliy is saved from this evil, who would be willing to explore the unexplored and find the new creatures just waiting to be found. Only the tough return, and the tougher return with numbers.

The continent is predominantly elven. There are two nations of humans, one lives in the mountains in the south west corner of the continent with the earth village of elves, and the other in the south east in the marshlands away from elves. The south east tends to like to kill the elves, they think the elves are too pompous and are currently at war to take out the 'elven scum' so that humans may rein supreme.

There are four different types of elves. The earth elves, wind elves, fire elves and water elves. They all have the ability to control their elements, but like most abilities; many don't know how to use it. The few who do predominantly only know basics, like starting fires or making a breeze. Most who have tried something stronger have died.

Like most worlds this one has many types of magicks. There are the divine, arcane, and elemental. Elemental is the least common and the most dangerous. It has been known to kill more people than any other magic and few use it for that reason alone. The other magicks are just safer.

There are also the Arcane magicks that are comprised of complicated words and gestures to get even the slightest thing done. Even though it tends to be safer it is looked down upon since in the past the Arcane magicks were used to try to take over the existing world. May people will disown family for the uses of the Arcane.

Lastly there are the Divine magicks. These are granted to those that are faithful to their god or element and are then blessed with healing magicks. These magicks range from empathy, to take others pain, to being able to heal with a touch. These magicks are the most prized and sought after. The people who wield them are praised and treated well no matter where they go.

(Currently drawing a map to help people understand the size and way that the city is structured.)

Eliy's rules

Eliy's Character Page

The City of Eliy (story) This is where all the writing takes place for Eliy.

Port City of Eliy This is where the writing takes place for Port City.

Here's what's been written before the current writings.

Eliy's Chapters 1-5

Eliy's Chapters 6-10

Eliy's Chapters 11-15

Eliy's Chapter 16 A Frozen Heart Starts to Thaw

Eliy's Chapter 17

Username (or number or email):


2004-05-12 [Firous]: Any and all suggestions are quiet welcome....I'm new at this thingy o.o

2004-05-27 [Firous]: You can't post on the's just a way for me to keep it organized...if you have any good ideas for chapter names then please tell me...thank you

2006-04-26 [Firous]: Hehehe...this is turning out great!

2006-05-16 [Linn Scarlett]: i might be poked to join, but i am not sure yet

2006-05-16 [Firous]: well feel free to ask questions.... Anything we can do to help. ^.^

2006-05-16 [Tirius]: Gah. I really don't know where to start.

2006-05-17 [K'jesrya]: heh heh...where ever you want yo

2006-05-17 [Linn Scarlett]: *ponders*

2006-05-17 [Blood Raven]: how about a summary of the story and what's going on?

2006-05-17 [lost_adonis]: bad guy laying seige to city... good guys trying to save city... good guys are the destined, thay have this elemental kick going

2006-05-17 [Firous]: Humans vs. elves....Elves are the moment. Humans are trying to destroy elven capitol...take over world thingy. Yeah... lol... Military personel would be nice for either side.

2006-05-19 [Linn Scarlett]: I might be inclined to an elvenwarlord ---i am used to playing the military men >.>

2006-05-19 [Linn Scarlett]: ...but then again i am used to drow, so maybe its not such a good idea >.>

2006-05-22 [Firous]: lol...think of somthing that you would enjoy playing and we'll talk about where to put you. I have no lack of spots.

2006-05-22 [Linn Scarlett]: something Evil & Overlord would be nice ^_^ and otherwise something overlord will do :)

2006-06-05 [Firous]: Evil and Overlord....hhhhmmmm... hehehehe. My Elven General that is a 'good' guy has been working inconspicuously for the humans. He took a bribe in a previous battle. He fails to follow or issue commands a little too 'convienently'. I had someone else interested but they haven't answered me yet. First come first served.

2006-07-30 [Linn Scarlett]: *ponders* you have no secret elven overlord that just wants to claim the whole damn city while trying to surpress the human? I mean, claim in the midst of the utter chaos ?

2006-07-31 [Firous]: Not yet... Do you have something in mind?

2006-08-07 [Linn Scarlett]: Well, I prefer walking around shrouded in clinging shadows and mystery, if that is at all possible. I suppose i could settle for an evil wizard aswell :p but it would be nice if i could be an important evil person ;)

2006-08-08 [K'jesrya]: i have no problems with handing over the writing of the main evil dude...i could send you a message as to what had been going on with him and we could work something out...that is if it's alright with my fello mod. Firous.

2006-08-09 [Linn Scarlett]: Sure, that would sound like fun :)

2006-08-09 [K'jesrya]: alright...i will ask Firous about it and see what she thinks

2006-08-10 [Firous]: go for it.

2006-10-23 [Firous]: I'm going to work on this page a bit more... Condense and describe the world/city more. Any suggestions?

2006-11-08 [Firous]: Slowly adding on! Yay for more detail!

2006-11-16 [ahsg]: So how goes the progress with this map I've been hearing about? Who's working on it by the way? And is there anything I can do?

2006-11-17 [Firous]: Jason and I have been working on it though the progress halted due to tests in classes. I will try to keep it going. Just keep bugging me to get it done.

2006-11-17 [Firous]: I've got a rough copy of the contenant, now I just need to finish the city and redo the larger map to look nice. hehehe.

2006-11-19 [ahsg]: Oooh! ^.^
I want to see it soon. ^-^
*shakes Firous*
Hurry! >_<

2006-11-20 [Firous]: lol...I'm trying! But I draw better when I'm not shaking!

2006-11-26 [ahsg]: Heh heh, sorry. ^-^

2006-11-27 [Firous]: ^.^ S'okay.

2007-01-05 [ahsg]: First of all, I want to apologize. I will no longer be around...this time for sure. Things at home have become complicated, and I won't ever be able to talk with any of you anymore. 

As for my part in the RP...a friend of mine, will offer his aid. He'll be using my character for me, if that's alright.
I wanted to give each of you a proper goodbye, but already, I have to log off. Bye was nice meeting all of you, really it was.

~Always your friend, Brian.

2007-01-05 [K'jesrya]: I am sad to see you go.

2007-01-06 [Firous]: ....That really sucks... If our paths should cross again I will welcome you back with open arms. But until then try to have fun and live life to the fullest! (Even if your friend has to relay the message I hope you get it!)

2007-01-09 [Linn Scarlett]: *strings a sad melody on her lute*

2007-01-12 [Firous]: Hey...are you still interested to join Linn? I've still been waiting to get new people.

2007-01-12 [Linn Scarlett]: of course :)

2007-01-12 [Firous]: Do you want to make your own character or take over one?

2007-01-12 [Linn Scarlett]: depends on wether that's needed or not :) i might drag my redmage in ^_^ though i'll have to change his complexion without any doubt :P

2007-01-13 [Firous]: Message me what you want and I will tell you how I can make it work.

2007-01-13 [lost_adonis]: We would love to have more minds to pick for this story! but only if you are dedicated and wanting to have fun!

2007-01-13 [K'jesrya]: i agree

2007-01-14 [One Winged Seraph]: Uh...I guess this is the place. 
Hey there. I'm the new guy, I guess.

2007-01-14 [Linn Scarlett]: hmm *ponders on it* ill need a few days to work an idea out

2007-01-16 [Firous]: You the one taking over Soren? Nice to meet you. I'm one of the mods... the other is [K'jesrya]. Welcome to our story. ^.^

2007-01-16 [K'jesrya]: indeed...welcome

2007-01-17 [One Winged Seraph]: "Soren," who's called Rowan from now on. Will...hmm, I guess still an ally to Eliy, just far more capable of fighting without remorse. I won't cross him into the enemy side.

2007-01-17 [K'jesrya]: ...

2007-01-19 [lost_adonis]: good luck with that...

2007-01-20 [One Winged Seraph]: ...right uh, sorry. I got no manners sometimes, so that was my bad. 

I don't say my real name to strangers, so just call me Caim for right now. And though I'm altering Brian's character a bit, I won't make him a bad guy. Since I doubt he would want me to do that...oh and, I posted already. If I was supposed to get permission first, I seriously didn't know. And I'll delete if none of you like it.

2007-01-29 [Firous]: Don't worry so much. I will warn you that the new semester started here and [K'jesrya], [lost_adonis], and I may not be on as often until we feel comfortable in our barage of classes. But we will not forget. Eventually [lost_adonis] and I will have internet again and it'll be easier.

2007-01-29 [K'jesrya]: definately

2007-01-30 [One Winged Seraph]: Okay, I'm glad you guys replied. I thought I screwed up big time and you people just quit on me. I'm seriously happy that I was wrong. I pray that our time together be good ones.

2007-01-31 [K'jesrya]: You didn't screw up at all. The only thing about Rowan is, He was not chosen to be the Wind Destined. Soren was. [Firous], [lost_adonis] and I have no problem with you playing Rowen as the badass assasin type, we think that's cool and it will twist up the story, which is always welcome. The spirit of Soren will most likely leave the body of Rowan and return to the Wind. The remaining Destined would feel the loss and mourn it, but Rowan would still carry the sword, and when he next drew it, it would lash out like it would if anyone else were to touch it besides the wind destined. If you want to play Rowan and Rowan only, feel free to go to the character page and make a 'Character sheet' for him. That way he is his own character and Soren will be returned to Air and lay at rest. That's what [Firous] and I well as [lost_adonis].

2007-02-01 [One Winged Seraph]: The more and more I think about it, the less I like it. I didn't want to take my friend out of the RP. He wouldn't want me to do that. I'll bring Soren back, and allow him to take control again. After someone postes, I'll make it to where Rowan plays his supporting role an inner voice.

2007-02-01 [K'jesrya]: we want you to play whatever you want..and it's totally alright with us for you to play whatever you want. But, again...its totally up to you

2007-02-02 [One Winged Seraph]: I play for my best friend, and that's mainly why I'm here. I'll bring back Soren, that's what I want. Also... this RP is interesting, one of the best ones I've ever been to, if I were to be honest. 

2007-02-02 [lost_adonis]: Dude play the assassin... he is cool. we need more "normal" characters to add depth to the story... besides we are only limited by our imagination as far as Soran... he can come back or be gone forever or even have a totally different incarnation of the wind. Go with your first inclination, play what you want.

2007-02-03 [One Winged Seraph]: I'll decide on my own, thanks. And I won't be posting until someone else does.

2007-02-03 [Firous]: It's ok. We're trying to get internet back on at our house but we will get the story ready. We are prepared to do what ever you want with Rowan. We even got story twists. So don't worry about what happens to Soren. All will be well. And as long as you're having fun and playing what you want we will have no problems with you.

2007-03-07 [Firous]: Internet's up. We will be regular now and we should be able to push this right along. I almost got the map done...though I wish I had better graph paper...

2007-03-09 [lost_adonis]: I have good graph paper... for a price... <evil grin>

The fox was ecstatic!

2007-04-20 [Firous]: I've finally drawn the world and I already have the continent...all I have left is the city then there will be maps galore! I hope. I may even expand this to have more adventures in the world...eventually.

2007-05-17 [Firous]: I have decided through the inactivity of the person playing Soren that we will once again have to find a new wind destined... I miss the original Soren.

2007-05-17 [Firous]: Any one have any suggestions? I know how Soren will die so don't ask. It's a surprise. but I want suggestions on anything else?

2007-07-25 [Firous]: I am really good at push starting my motorcycle...lets see if I can do it here too!!

2007-09-24 [Firous]: Well...when something gentle doesn't work hit it till it's fixed right? One more chance to post before I do something drastic. *Holding giant wrench with scary smile*

2007-09-27 [lost_adonis]: HA you didn't think that would happen did you!

2007-09-27 [Firous]: Soo.... Something happened right?

2008-01-10 [Endless Time]: Okay...I can finally get to it. I apologize for the wait.

2008-01-12 [Firous]: Apology not accepted. Only posting frequently will appease me. ^.^

2008-01-13 [K'jesrya]: Such a harsh task-master. ah well...we love her anyway. *wink wink*

2008-01-14 [Firous]: I love you too B!

2008-01-14 [Tirius]: EEP!

2008-01-16 [Firous]: EEP! What? Are you finally ready to join us? Join us... @.@

2008-08-22 [Firous]: Need a title for chapter 17...

2008-08-29 [Firous]: Any suggestions??

2008-08-29 [Hiuko]: How about, The Attack of Eliy!

2008-08-30 [Firous]: hehehe... the obvious is usually the best

2008-09-07 [Firous]: I swear... right when you think you got things where you want stuff happens and flips you about... In other words sorry I'm running late. Hubby got in a motorcycle accident and now I've been stressing and not very creative. He's fine... but we have no medical insurance to pay for the hospital bills... and the ambulance alone cost almost $1k...for a 3 mile ride... they rip you off soo much...

2008-09-08 [Hiuko]: Sorry about that. Been busy of late myself but then again even when I do have time to come on nothing happens here.

2008-09-09 [Firous]: I will have to fix that... I'm going to see what I can do... Muhahahahahaha!

2008-10-21 [Firous]: Sorry for the delay... Baby stuff is taking up my life at the moment. She's over due. but I have discussed with [K'jesrya] how to start Port City and we're considering giving it it's own page.

2008-10-22 [Hiuko]: I might resubmit my character, I'm not sure though. Give me a day or two, been going through some stuff with my characters.

2008-10-31 [Firous]: no rush... I'm going to be really slow now... Had the baby on the 23rd. She's been perfect and I just have been spending a lot of time with her instead of being online.

2008-11-29 [Firous]: Yay!! I did something!! And the baby's alseep. ^.^

2008-12-01 [Hiuko]: So where do we go to for the main RP?

2008-12-06 [Firous]: there's a link for the city of eliy story up there for the main rp. If you're going to jump into port city there's a link up there as well. (typing one handed sucks...) It would be easier to start at port city. I have a way to get you into eliy from there. ^.^

2008-12-06 [Hiuko]: Okay thank you

Number of comments: 90
Older comments: (Last 200) 4 3 2 1 .0.

Show these comments on your site

Elftown - Wiki, forums, community and friendship. Sister-site to Elfwood