2006-12-28 [Kim_Lundin]: A good character. The only thing I'm wondering about is the history part, it seems like it is cut short after his escape from the Shou-anaih. What happened directly after his escape? Why didn't he return home? Things like that would be nice to know. Other than that little point everything seems fine to me, I just want to see what you think about adding some small details to the history before I accept him.
2006-12-29 [NightHawk]: Hmmm... you're right. I pretty much copied/pasted that part from the other bio. Heh, I guess I'll do that now ^^
2006-12-30 [Kim_Lundin]: That looks great, character accepted.
2006-12-30 [Linn Scarlett]: *nod nod* yeah it looks great! hope to encounter him sometimes in the wfr's XD
2006-12-30 [NightHawk]: Hehe ^^ Thank ye, all!