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Note: This was originally a dutch story of mine.The original version can be found in my diary.

Note2:If you see grammar mistakes, please correct them.

note3:And please leave a comment of your opinion.



confused I turn around. "What will it be this time?", I think to myself.


"yes, I'm coming" I shouted back."Did I do anything
wrong ? My coat is where he should be, My shoes too. My key too.
All of the sudden she is in front of me, in the door opening that seperates the kitchen from the hall.Pissed of, like always.
"What's the matter mom ?" I asked softly.
And then , with her cold voice she said" You didn't do the dishes".
"But I did" I said uncomprehending.
"No, you didn't" she replied, again with that cold, scary calm voice.

She turned around and pointed at the sink.
Indeed, I wasn't finished.
One glass was still standing.
In it, there was still something left from her favourite lemonade.

"I will do it right away, mother"
"Don't let it happen again"
"Non mom, sorry mom"

She turned around and went back to the television.
I looked at the clock, it was 8:20 pm.
I will probably here that later too.
"Because of you I missed the beginning of my favourite television show. Why don't you ever take a example from your 2 elder brothers? They were good sons."
At least they had a father, was always my thought when she said that.

2 minutes later I had washed the glass and I was back upstairs.

Not caring a bit about it I was staring at my mathbook.
I started thinking about Lisle.
She understands this mathcrap. She can understand everything except me.
But she was always there for me. For fun, for pleasure.
She would never betray me. But she would also never understand me.
Why I do certain things, why I say certain things.
But she would always support me, as long as I didn't hurt anyone.
That last thought made me smile.
I'm such a peaceful person, just because I hurt myself sometimes
doesn't mean that I will harm others.
I only do justified actions.
Like that time little Thomas was lost.
Another smile came to me.


My daydream shattered into pieces.My smile was erased.


"I'LL GET TO IT RIGHT NOW, MOM"was my reply, hoping that she didn't come upstairs.She didn't.

That was her. For visitors this place has to be perfect.
Happy, happy, happy, happy family for everyone else.
My true happy thoughts were gone.
All that mattered now was cleaning.



Her subtile way of saying "go to sleep".
Today I had, for once, no trouble of getting in bed.
I felt for once enormously calm.
I had some plans for in bed.
But only after she slept, she didn't need to know.
This is something for me.

I stayed awake untill 11:30 pm.
i heard some noise down stairs.
"Good, she is getting into bed."

I waited another hour.
Then I got out of bed.
And went straight downstairs.
Straight to the kitchen equipment.
I choose very carefully and take then the most suitable.
I started walking calmly around the house.
Like I do more often.
( "Midnight walks" as Lisle called it when I told her about it )
Finally I stopped.
I take the knife.
And I cut , with one big slash.
I was able to surpress the scream.

"Hello, with the hospital."
"Goodevening, I would like to report the death of my mother."

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2004-11-03 [Rook]: very nicely written. are you working on more? a novel perhaps?

2004-11-03 [Kayne]: no matter a fact I'm working on something: A kind of story/book it depends the lentgh of my ideal world.

2005-02-17 [Kanye]: Well done, I like how you led the reader down one path and then completely shifted at the end. He went for a 'midnight walk' and slashed what I thought was himself, when he'd actually killed his mother. I wasn't expecting that at all. I hope you write more!

2005-02-17 [Kayne]: *Is busy writing another story.* Hey, name-mate :p Thanks for the revieuw. :-)

2005-02-17 [iippo]: My gosh, another kayne, except spelled and capitalised wrongly... o.O *is intimidated and hides behind the real kayne*

2005-02-17 [Kayne]: She is nice. I have seen her a few times. Don't be shy.

2005-02-18 [iippo]: Ah, ok. Scary person turned out to be... well, still a scary person.

2005-02-19 [Kayne]: *POokes* Don't be shy.

2005-02-19 [iippo]: Hmm, a lot of people have said that to me lately... (well, two if I count you, but both husband-ish guys)... I am shy.

2005-02-20 [Kayne]: Do you have anotyher husband? *is jealous.*

2005-02-20 [iippo]: No one like you. But yes. :\ I've told you. "Cuddling buddy".

2005-02-20 [Kayne]: Aaaaah. Hva you read the rules of cuddling buddy in my diary? :p

2005-02-20 [iippo]: I have. They don't apply because mine went beyond that... And we prefer to see each other all the time, neither is experienced, and our siblings are in different countries...

2005-02-20 [Kayne]: :P BTW - me and Cuddling Buddy kissed.

2005-02-20 [iippo]: Again? Or is this the same information that you alread gave me on MSN?

2005-02-20 [Kayne]: No, on messenger (I thought) I said we sort of kissed. I kissed she didn't pull away. Now we kissed properly. I kissed and she kissed back.

2005-02-20 [iippo]: Ah, uber. Is it? Where does the little sibling fit into the image?

2005-02-20 [Kayne]: She always bugs us. This is hilarious: We always meet on her room and every thime her sister said "you are kissing" and the first time we actually kissed she said " you couldn't have been kissing, I heard you laughing".

2005-02-20 [iippo]: W00t! How uber is that...!

2005-02-20 [Kayne]: Utterly uber.

2005-03-18 [Kanye]: *backs away slowly*

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