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2009-06-19 17:59:56
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The wound was deep
But the chest lay empty.
The grave was unneeded,
Last rites had no sound.

The seed took root, breathed in,
And grew


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2009-06-19 [Linderel]: I love how the last line lacks punctuation. Leaves this wonderfully open, and I can actually feel the growth. Spidery little vines going up in all directions...

2009-06-19 [Chimes]: :D Then it did what it's supposed to. I was determined to use all of the prompts... and I managed it! :D

2009-06-19 [Linderel]: Yay for you!

2009-06-19 [Chimes]: Now... for the rest of them... *toddles*

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