2008-12-21 [SilverFire]: Sorry, I deleted my comment before I noticed your reply (else I would've left it ._.;;), because I noticed something more important: You already have a crew app, why have you made another?
2008-12-21 [Rice]: Yes..this is my re-do of it since my last application was only of Medium quality. I have thus atempted to make it better.
2008-12-21 [SilverFire]: Well you could've just edited your old one, and made a note that it was re-done, and we'd have looked at it again. :) But since you changed your username since then, I can understand why you wanted to make a new page, but it would have been good if you'd dropped a comment letting us know, so we can remove your old attempt.
2008-12-21 [Rice]: Awfully sorry, I've only just got the page up and I was still editing so I hadn't got around to leaving a comment yet.
But you crew members are as quick as ever and got there before me..thankyou kindly.
2008-12-21 [SilverFire]: XP Arrite then. Must have just been (un)lucky timing - I'd only just got back to ET. :P
2008-12-21 [Rice]: Not unlucky..lucky for me because now I've had a chance to change a few bits your pointed out. 8)
I hope this time around my application it better.
2008-12-21 [Chimes]: You might want to link to active wikis... it would be of more credit to you than inactive ones.
2008-12-22 [Rook.]: Add me, Mobster fish :D
2008-12-22 [Rice]: Thanks Lou!
2008-12-22 [Rook.]: no problem Keys!! ^^
2008-12-24 [Rice]: Oh ok.
Well I will leave it now.
2008-12-29 [Rook.]: I hopwe you make it, Keys...
2008-12-29 [Rice]: Thanks Lou~
2008-12-29 [Rook.]: no problem. how was your christmas?
2009-02-12 [Alexi Ice]: Mitsuki's critisisum - Heya! Just read through your appliciation and it is very well written but...it has a few awakward sentances that have 'snares' which are just things you look at and go...well...th
Also it is all kind of vauge and quick, you never really explain HOW you intend to help elftown, and on the 'apply to crew page' I belive you missed a few of those questions. You have a few spelling and grammar mistakes in here as well that I have noticed. Adding links to things like the daily poem and other stuff you have badges for is important as well and finally;
You would do well to create contest wikis, offer your services to the crew, participate in official and un-official contests and things, which I already notice you doing a bit but...make yourself known ^^
Also, your art and photos are lovely but...I don't belive they should be featured on your application. I don't know why but your art skills while they do help some of the council members, it is not really going to help you be a good council member in regards to the community.
Well those are my critisisums!
2009-02-12 [Chimes]: A small pointer: Two of your supporters haven't been seen around here for near on or over 100 days... so aren't an active part of elftown so their support doesn't really help you very much especially as you put this up after they disappeared. Active supporters are the way to go.
2009-02-13 [Rice]: Thank you both.
2009-02-13 [Alexi Ice]: Not a problem at all, like I said, good luck! ^^
2009-02-13 [Duke Devlin]: Just a note to Mitsuki: It's lovely that you are offering criticism, but the fact that you mentioned spelling and grammatical errors is somewhat hypocritical. :P You have a fair few in your critique. XD