2010-11-19 [wicked fae mage]: Message me with it or link me to it :)
2010-11-19 [SilverFire]: Or just post it here, and we can all help. :P
2010-11-19 [wicked fae mage]: Naturally, but I couldn't speak for everybody else's willingness or reluctance. :3
2010-11-19 [SilverFire]: Well, posting it here doesn't force other people to respond. X)
2010-11-20 [Alexi Ice]: Thank you both! *Hugs Fae then eye's Silver* Would you kill me if I hugged you?
- Like I said, I think it's five, seven and four. (Needs to find random syllable to the end of line three...>>)
2010-11-20 [wicked fae mage]: No, I like hugs. *hugs*
2010-11-20 [SilverFire]: Fae's count is right. All the words you've picked are 1 syllable, which is kind of impressive. :P
You could shift it around a bit,
'When the clock does dare (5)
to mock - tick, tock, tick, tock, (6, so you'd need 1 more)'
Then you'd have a whole 'nother line to play with. :O
2010-11-20 [Alexi Ice]: KK! I can totally do this! Thank you for your time!
2010-11-20 [Alexi Ice]:
Did I get the count right this time...>> *failing all over the place*
2010-11-20 [SilverFire]: First line is 5, not 4, (which is good, that's what it's supposed to be), but the last line is 7 syllables - bo.dy, soul.less are both 2 syllables.
2010-11-20 [wicked fae mage]: I don't know how to explain syllables...st
2010-11-20 [Flisky]: Uh...the first line is 6...(I have no idea how you all count syllables, but six different one syllable words is 6 syllables...)
The last line is 7 syllables...Ma
2010-11-20 [SilverFire]: Yeah, I just counted five words. <_<
2010-11-21 [Alexi Ice]: Is the first line five or six? (confused)
2010-11-21 [SilverFire]: 6. You've got 6 words. No word is less than one syllable.
2010-11-21 [Alexi Ice]: Ah ~ (Thinking about just giving up)
2010-11-21 [wicked fae mage]: Dictionaries break words into syllables, too, if you don't want to wait for use to respond to a comment
2010-11-23 [NorthStorm]: Umm... Nioniel.. cool name; but that's definitely not a haiku.
2010-11-23 [Thunder Cid]: Yeah it looks like it 5,8,4. All you need to do is drop a syllable in the second line and add one in the third.
2010-11-24 [NorthStorm]: Better, kinda
2011-01-12 [Akayume]: Pretty good turn-out for this contest! (: