2009-03-18 [Chimes]: I like it. :D You needs to fix the 'Above' The A is on a separate line O.o
2009-03-18 [Barock]: :P
2010-04-30 [Linderel]: Oooh. I quite like this. You change tense after the first sentence, though - you might want to fix that. There are also some apostrophes missing.
2011-08-01 [Priscilla Primkin]: Very pretty. Your English needs work, though, as the syntactical errors detract from the overall effect.
2011-08-02 [Barock]: I wrote this in my first year of my Creative Writing degree =]
So, apologies for errors in syntax and general grammar I swear it's of a higher quality now =P
Glad you all liked it though!
I should put up some of my newer stuff! x
2011-10-24 [Infested_Zling]: love it! its beautiful!