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2006-09-05 11:58:09
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Centaur Poetry / Stories


You have a story or a poem about centaurs, or one featuring them? Link or post 'em here, we'll take all you've got to give. Just remember to use these here formats, and everything's just shiny.

[yourusername] - Poem title

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[Zab] - Canantass
The skye was black of wind and smoke
His sword shining white
His arrow had a tinted stroke
Of the blood from fight

His roar filled the thick, black air
Among with cries of pain
Rain gathered in his long, dark hair
His life was spilled in vain

Hooves slipping on bloodred grass
A spear in his throat
Ever heard the name Canantass
Who died in Axiroat?

He was a centaur strong and brave
Killed in the pouring rain
He could not his own life save
But was in battle slain

Forever know his memory
As the warrior he was
He deserved his life in agony
But finding peace he has.


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<img:img/drawing/80746_1099420893.jpg> Selene - [Linderel]


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2006-09-03 [Linderel]: I have an extremely black and white view on my writings. If it's not good, it's crap. And crap's worth just that.
Of course, you can read it and say if you think it can be posted, but I'm not likely to change my mind about how I feel about it.

2006-09-03 [Zab]: aws.... no. I won't read it i it won't be posted.

2006-09-03 [Linderel]: It's crap. *cries*

2006-09-03 [Zab]:'s not.

2006-09-03 [Linderel]: *goes take a nap* And hopefully I'll be less angsty about it after getting some sleep...

2006-09-03 [Zab]: yeah.:S

2006-09-03 [Linderel]: I am told it's not crappy, it just lacks that Certain Something. From the proofreader-person's point of view. Maybe someone will think it's good, he tends to have high standards, anyway. :P
Whatever, for me there's no difference, I can't tell what's good and what's not about my own stuff. xD It's all crap to me. :P

2006-09-03 [Zab]: XD aws. Shouldn't be.

2006-09-03 [Linderel]: <_<
Well, I can tell myself I'm getting better, and definitely that I've gotten better from what I was two years or even a year ago. It's just that I'm still very insecure. ._.
Anyways... I think I'll put it up, I'll just edit in the corrections and try to come up with a decent title. And then I can start thinking about writing the next one, which hopefully will be better...

2006-09-03 [sequeena_rae]: Don't worry, mine isn't that much better *hopes to be finished soon*
But at least we will have done something x)

2006-09-03 [Zab]: Good thinking:P

2006-09-04 [Linderel]: There we go, first story. ^_^

2006-09-05 [Zab]: It sucks! XD (the poetry I submitted..not the story..x)
But it felt empty up there.

2006-09-05 [Linderel]: It doesn't suck! :o It has some typos, but they're forgivable. :P
And you can rhyme! *tips hat*

2006-09-05 [Zab]: *lmao* It does too! Change the typos if you long as it doesn't affect the rhymes..x)

2006-09-05 [Linderel]: Does not. :P

2006-09-05 [Zab]: XD

2006-09-05 [Linderel]: Hum. Would it look silly if centered?

2006-09-05 [Zab]: do as you want..but I like it as it is..Oo

2006-09-05 [Linderel]: Just thinking. :P

2006-09-05 [Zab]: :P

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