2006-09-29 [Lady of Lore]: ^_^
2008-11-11 [pegasus1000]: -starts reading-
2008-11-11 [Linderel]: Oh my, a reader!
2008-11-11 [pegasus1000]: so far all if the stories I have read are nice. Easy to read. I would sujust working on your characters.
2008-11-11 [Linderel]: Working on my characters how, exactly? Are they too bland - should I strive to make them more real for the reader? Or did you mean something else?
2008-11-11 [Triola]: You should sparkle them with shiny things! *is butting in* >.>
2008-11-11 [Linderel]: Hahaha xD And what does that mean, Trin dear?
2008-11-11 [Triola]: Make them all wear sequined clothes? Return of the 80ies! :D
2008-11-11 [pegasus1000]: While reading some of your stories it seems like the speaker is sitting next to himself telling the story. Sensory detail might help.
2008-11-11 [Linderel]: Ah. I see.
2008-11-11 [Linderel]: Sure, go ahead. :)
2008-11-12 [Linderel]: Revamp yay.
2008-12-02 [Dark Side of the Moon]: ooh, a new writings page to haunt... *haunts*
2008-12-02 [Linderel]: 'ello :D
2010-01-27 [9jlriexqk,ktpk]: Hm. I am liking some of the things that I have read here so far. Quite impressive.